Would Appreciate Anyone's Opinion

Looks nice, I would first off recommend implementing H1 tag on your site. Looks like everything is set to H2 for your title tags. I would also recommend restructuring your url for each page (EX: your product page) to something like domain.com/security-products

Breadcrumbs is very helpful for your type of website as well. nice implementation.

Feel free to browse my site if you would like.

Lawsuit Funding Company
 
look unprofessional for security categorized site... potential customer probably will not trust your site...
about us and contact us page may be better... about us page is just "hmm..."... there can say that site is self created (and again that is 0 trust). Contact us page offer yahoo email (like you are without domain and website)... you have domain, i believe that you can create your own email under your domain.
Privacy policy is about 400 words... way to low.
But main problem there is design... to bad for market.
btw... background seem like takes from http://www.grsites.com/ textures
 
usalawsuitfunding said:
Looks nice, I would first off recommend implementing H1 tag on your site. Looks like everything is set to H2 for your title tags. I would also recommend restructuring your url for each page (EX: your product page) to something like domain.com/security-products

Breadcrumbs is very helpful for your type of website as well. nice implementation.

Feel free to browse my site if you would like.

Lawsuit Funding Company
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I appreciate your time. Have started url for each page... What is the difference between H1 and H2 and how do I implement it?
 
YugiohShare said:
look unprofessional for security categorized site... potential customer probably will not trust your site...
about us and contact us page may be better... about us page is just "hmm..."... there can say that site is self created (and again that is 0 trust). Contact us page offer yahoo email (like you are without domain and website)... you have domain, i believe that you can create your own email under your domain.
Privacy policy is about 400 words... way to low.
But main problem there is design... to bad for market.
btw... background seem like takes from http://www.grsites.com/ textures
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wrong on background but very good feedback. Very good and thank you. My plan was to implement personalization for customer trust and you may be right in that I took it too far. Any specifics as far as color scheme or anything? I will update Privacy Policy and About Us. Again, Thank you.
 
www.urfamilydefenders.com said:
I am new to owning my own website and have had countless hours doing and redoing. I'm sure you all know about this but if you could please take a look at my site and give me feedback on the user-ability.
www.urfamilydefenders.com
Thank You All!
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Hi,

I think you are over doing the color scheme. You should pick two, maybe three colors for everything. All of your links should be the same color so it is easier to determine what is a link and what is not. Your background should be one color I would suggest white. I know it's not pretty but neither is a montage of colors. White however is clean and professional. It will also make the photos of your great deals blend into the page and not stand out as odd shaped boxes.

Your website would look much more professional with white background, black type and red (maybe dark blue) links, period. You can see the ghost effect with the red type on the grey background. That is your first clue that those colors do not go well together. Google "color wheel" and you will get lots of information on what colors work well together (complimentary - opposite side of color wheel) and those that don't. If you could blend your header to go all the way across the top it would work much better, right now it is like your "great deals" and looks like it was just "stuck" up there with no thought of blending or merging together with the website. Make your outer background black and your fixed width inside background white, and blend your header into the black.

I think your biggest problem is your color choices, although some of your pages are not laid out very well or don't provide much information. Something like the "crime statistics" page might work better as simply a downloadable pdf file that can be designed better to relate the information in an easier reading format.

Hope this helps.
 
SLP Enterprises LLC said:
Hi,

I think you are over doing the color scheme. You should pick two, maybe three colors for everything. All of your links should be the same color so it is easier to determine what is a link and what is not. Your background should be one color I would suggest white. I know it's not pretty but neither is a montage of colors. White however is clean and professional. It will also make the photos of your great deals blend into the page and not stand out as odd shaped boxes.

Your website would look much more professional with white background, black type and red (maybe dark blue) links, period. You can see the ghost effect with the red type on the grey background. That is your first clue that those colors do not go well together. Google "color wheel" and you will get lots of information on what colors work well together (complimentary - opposite side of color wheel) and those that don't. If you could blend your header to go all the way across the top it would work much better, right now it is like your "great deals" and looks like it was just "stuck" up there with no thought of blending or merging together with the website. Make your outer background black and your fixed width inside background white, and blend your header into the black.

I think your biggest problem is your color choices, although some of your pages are not laid out very well or don't provide much information. Something like the "crime statistics" page might work better as simply a downloadable pdf file that can be designed better to relate the information in an easier reading format.

Hope this helps.
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You hit that out of the park! I could sense this but could not find a solution. You have given me great feedback thank you. I will get to work!
 
It looks good, You can work on your footer a bit....Otherwise It looks awesome.....Keep the good work up....
 
1. I think the titles in the navigation bar can be bigger
2. May I suggest that the picture of the burglars be above the fold? This will create the pain upfront.

Just my 2 cents worth :)
 
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